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    D Light
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    I challenge anybody on here

    Post by D Light on Wed Jul 15, 2009 11:10 am

    Ill battle whoever goes first no retypes give me written or top of the dome freestyles

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    Re: I challenge anybody on here

    Post by clivir men on Sat Jul 18, 2009 2:14 pm

    "you want to rap vs me?
    you a little bit crazy?
    challenging the king of rap aint wise
    so I would advize
    you turn around and walk away and say your goodbyes
    it might be hard seems how your so fat but walking is good exercise
    maybe you could walk to mc donalds after training for some frenchfries"

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    Re: I challenge anybody on here

    Post by jkilla6148 on Sun Jul 19, 2009 1:01 am

    yo d light you cant check muh flow
    cuz the joe flow make ya scream like a hoe
    bitch ass nigga you wanna battle me
    some fresh meat aint got nothin they cant see
    my rhymes are heavy like the weight i bare
    but what you say? shit niggas dont care.
    you best not flollow me back to tha lare cuz you know yall might get a death stare
    nah bitch i aint talkin bout the glare, just stop nigga go stand over there.
    yall are light wieght cuz yall cant stand it,
    bitch got scared ,ran and got back handed
    so ya know what bitch thats all im done
    because before you were born i had already won.

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    Re: I challenge anybody on here

    Post by D Light on Sun Jul 19, 2009 2:54 pm

    Now i got 2 challengers
    how bout i give u both 2 hits wit 2 caliburs
    I give the game meaning
    Im D light cuz i dont have to go hard to give yall complications breathing
    ive been in the struggle
    till i turned every little thing small to a bundle
    I dont do gimics mimics and unlike yall I get hotter by the minute
    and I blew my roof off cuz da ceiling was not my limit
    now i do outdoor battles till niggaz need lifejackets and paddles to finish
    Im not a wannabe im where the hunters be and youll drown in a river if your flow is under me
    I could teach you some new shit call it mentoring
    and i got so many bars in my head i could create a penitentiary
    so yall raps were fine but wasted ya time im hard liquor you wine by far sicker wit rhymes
    and as for yall flow i checked it met it now i fucking regret it u get it

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    Re: I challenge anybody on here

    Post by The Devils Requiem on Mon Jul 20, 2009 7:37 pm

    WHEN B GRAB THE PAPER AND THE MUTHAFUCKIN PEN I
    SPIT THE FLOW WITH THE FORCE LIKE A FUCKIN JEDI
    AND THEN I, CATCH THE GLASS EYES OFF THE RED EYE
    HAIL FROM THE AK BUT ITS VERY FAR FROM BEDSTUY
    DON'T TRY TO BUTTER BREAD WITH GOOD JOBS OR WELL WISHES
    I ROCK TATTOOS OF CRUCIFIXES FLIPPED DOWN WITH TRIPLE SIXES
    THEY CALL ME MR. BLACK AND DECKER RHYME INC.
    SPIT TEN BARS FASTER THEN YA EYES BLINK
    I THINK YA MIGHT SINK, NOW YA FUCKIN DROWNIN BRO
    NEVER LET CHA GO LIKE MY NAME WAS UNDERTOW

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    Re: I challenge anybody on here

    Post by D Light on Wed Jul 22, 2009 6:11 pm

    Hey Requiem you must get high everytime that your weed comes

    if u think your lines hit as much as my speed drums

    Im gutta like no otha but you smotha and go down on ya own brotha

    you act like a cobra

    Ill take your tat rip it off yo back turn it upside down and call that the crossova

    da lords side is where im at

    cuz da blessings I recieved is like winnin a title match

    It feels good

    and my hood dont respect it as much as they should

    but c da hatin im used to taking like da money where it stood

    stiil i put it to good will u use papa to buy them fake grillz

    you create skillz you aint got not even a lil

    My flow is steady snd yours spills Im ILL!
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    Re: I challenge anybody on here

    Post by JMCSWH on Thu Jul 30, 2009 12:14 am

    U niggas keep on tryin me

    comin at me wit sum beef

    Starin at my bucket seats

    84 on 23's

    Yall comin at me sideways

    Niggas b fake now-a-days

    Stackin paper rockin j's

    Stunna shades nigga I'm made

    Movin bricks an breakin keys

    Was born an raised on da streets

    Now I'm wreckin on these beats

    Fuck with me I'll make u bleed

    Cut ya throat wen u sleep

    So u prayin at night hopin for life

    Wishin I don't ride tonight

    U die in my sight, u cryin for life

    Nigga don't be tryna hide

    I want wats mine, comin wit a glock or a nine

    Tryna find wat I want da white or da fire

    Da sight of a liar gets me all pshyched up

    Set to kill for I even pic da mic up

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    Re: I challenge anybody on here

    Post by clivir men on Thu Jul 30, 2009 4:37 pm

    you all words nothing to back it up
    ha! talking to me as if you were a grownup
    acting all hard
    wen your just a big fat tub of lard!
    i look at a pig and think its your splitting image
    its not my fault you're the only gay in the village
    when i slammed your mothers ass i apologise if theres spillage
    its just she's so tight i came on her face and cleavage
    you're from a world thats a pig sty
    will i let you get ahead? when pigs fly
    you must be on the crack like whitney or losing your marbles like britney to think you can diss me
    me beating you im writing history
    i can catch you in a playground where the kids be
    i run the stretch from england to italy
    what that guy said you write rhymes originally
    im unique and you just arent as fit as me
    when you replied i was like oh shit he triggered me
    now you've had to deal with the disasterous delivery
    forget putting your heart into an epiphany
    forget battling me specifically
    we all know you came from down under just like an aberiginy
    wen i see you im gonna hit you with deadly combos
    ive got the mind of M.Schofield and the brute of L.Burrows!
    i'll take you out cos your the one i despise
    if you keep going the price of your freedoms gonna rise"

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    Re: I challenge anybody on here

    Post by nick hersee on Mon Aug 17, 2009 10:51 pm

    you think you can destroy me
    you cant beat me lyrically
    i cripple mc's sinistrely
    im so crazy you might catch strays from g3's from the back seat
    because im dropping bombs like afgan, im on half a can, im half man
    half lyrical genius
    you never seen this done like this before these words are raw
    im droppin them like im poppin hoppin stompin on one foot still DROPPIN EM
    im going in rectangles around this town
    tierd of running circles around
    these fake mcs tryna step to me,
    my two lock stocks are cocked
    click clock goes my glock on the block
    waiting for these fake ass niggas to run up for there rocks
    boom pow goes my nine your mine these rhymes are a sign of defeat
    you will find no other im the reaper the creaper put you in the sleeper
    aint no way you gonna catch me fightin
    youll catch me slice n dicen
    rippin and gashin
    tearing n screamin
    bitch you aint dreamin
    this is how i do it
    this is how i be spittin
    sick rhymes crazy shit im ill with it like eminem im infinite

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    Re: I challenge anybody on here

    Post by D Light on Mon Aug 31, 2009 12:53 pm

    havent been on this page cuz i smelled a fish odor
    but ima controller and ima play till i win or its just game over
    for all yall out of place im a give you order
    you broke and lifes a bitch cuz you cant afford her
    you remind me of and old dude holdin on for air on the wall
    yall tell so much stories but where do you store it all
    Im a wrecking ball did ya memory forget D Light could destroy a mall?
    here you clivir men but ya real names paul
    if D even points a spot on the ground then thats where youll fall
    i send pics to ya head cuz i dont go to bed with a draw
    you write on scratch paper im typing from da mind wit lion claws
    im sharp cuz i use a needle and a dart
    to numb ya ass and then rip u apart
    i sting to quick for u to feel it
    u need to think then after bee like damn he really sealed it
    ima wrap up well like taco bell
    man yall just fryin yallselves in a pan like yolk out the egg shells

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    Re: I challenge anybody on here

    Post by Verse2 on Mon Aug 31, 2009 9:20 pm

    Is dis da dude who went and called me out?/
    da 30 year old who lives wit his mom
    can't go outta da house/
    lives n da garbage/
    next 2 his father da grouch/
    i kno u wanna cry/
    ya shrink said embrace ya inner fag/
    bust~n out da crease jus embrace ya outter flab/
    a minor nuisance/
    easily picked off like a scab/
    an uppercut from Verse gives da neck of a giraffe/
    u called out a typhoon/
    natural~disas/(disaster)
    homes he's a leach yo/
    prolly da fat kid at school who gets a wedgie/
    always stash~n some Cheetos/(lol)
    dis fish is a G yo/
    more like a G~nome/
    midget/
    scared like a bizz~nitch/
    Nemo/
    he~onn/
    drugs/
    2 think dat he could beat me/
    or maybe he jus mad he jus
    found out he got VD/
    he says he's a controller/
    well dude is defective/
    i want my money back/
    my receipt?/
    yea i kept it/
    !REJECTION!/
    dats why he asked so discreetly/
    love letter n hand/
    jus couldn't wait 2 uck~n meet me/
    da bitch type/
    always gotta talk u watch~n da t.v/
    and he think he sick/
    but by dat mean~n it burns when he pee~pees/(lol)
    so come on dog/
    there's a gap n our comparison/
    my careers n bloom/
    urz been ova like Harrison's/
    Fordeeee/
    fall back/
    I jus hit a birdie/
    dis nigga is a fruit/
    u kno he prevents scurvy/
    there ain't alot of thanks~giving/
    but here's a turkey/
    and i don't mind carve~n em 4 Jersey/
    You Ernie/
    nigga where's Bert?/
    u kno he breaks his legs n/
    he taught em how 2 "jerk"/(lol)


    u want me 2 keep goin...lol....


    yo 4 real...if we gon do dis we gon need judges homie....cuz nobody ever wants 2 admit defeat or ever say dey lost...dat shit always gets on my nerves...3 niggas...who are unbiased...dat way we keep it fair...and it ain't no arguement about what went down...not trynn nuff~n funny jus keep~n it real...cuz i b hate~n dat lil bitch ish where niggaz running around talk~n dat shit know~n damn well dey got ownedddd....lol


    either way...i back down from none...so u tell me whatchu wanna do



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    Re: I challenge anybody on here

    Post by Verse2 on Tue Sep 01, 2009 1:37 pm

    u walk~n down da wrong back block/
    I'm bout as raw as Sahtyre/
    gotta rap sheet bigger den Sasquatch/
    u ass ock/
    trynna pull a win off me/
    dats jus a bad plot/
    had em running more yards den Donovan Mcnabb got/
    make em freeze/
    control/
    alt/
    den delete/
    bald~headed bitch nigga/
    tell em off wit his weave/
    he gett~n smart/
    trynn different market~n schemes/
    but bitch all n his genes/
    dats why he rock~n tight jeans/
    i mean/
    He Mugsy Bouges/
    I'm Warren Sapp/
    come play me up n my sport/
    get destroyed jus like Shaq/
    might flex/
    mic check 1,2,1,2/
    dis nigga got more chick n em den da moulan Rouge/
    letz get a 2on2/
    or even a 1on2/
    jus 2 even da odds/
    i'll tell u what i'm gon do/
    i'll "allow" u 2 pick our judges/
    from ya clique or ya covern/
    from dusk 2 dawn/
    dis da shit i govern/
    u beat~n me/
    like Beans vs Soulja Boy/
    stomach growl~n/
    hear it making da moped noise/
    witcha shitty ass raps/
    i get so annoyed/
    but when i come out wit da easy win/
    ya girl will b overjoyed/
    so when u talk about ya favorite/
    u can say dat be me/
    i'ma tell u like tell my bitches/


    "don't watch me, watch t.v."/(lol)


    aiiight...i'm out...felt like doin another 1 b4 left da house

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    Re: I challenge anybody on here

    Post by JR on Tue Sep 01, 2009 4:11 pm

    up until now u been rippin mediocre niggas
    but like my rhymes the fingers speedy over triggers
    now you got a competitor whose better than ya go figure
    so stop with the hard talk and the walk the far walk
    you on my level? pft i'll leave u in shock
    fuck a glock take a rock matter fact kick rocks
    knock your top off and out your fuckin socks
    think you dope im like flava flav rockin clocks
    you beggin for money for ice maybe even suckin cocks
    get outta this game dog it aint your forte'
    and with each wack rhyme homie you lookin more gay
    im the stallion of the game you a lil horsay
    i suggest u back down but its your call yay or nay
    lyrically your hurtin dog
    and its concernin dog
    so please take my advice and do some learnin dog
    or at least memorize your lines and verses dog
    so you dont come through with some wack shit
    its just to easy to murder you with my lyrical hatchet
    dont get me started, cause my flow? you'll hatch it
    somethin so nice you wont be able to match it
    be havin you jealous u copy/pastin to snatch it
    thats it
    you testicular faggot
    probably suck so much dick they call you gay magnet
    bouta get rashed, humiliated and stomped u fuckin maggot
    dog i had it
    with your failing rhymes
    so ima tell you two more times
    get off the page
    get off the page
    cause you dont wana let the beast out the cage

    serious...

    and PLEASE my dudes... lets get a judge up in here... i want my win..

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    Re: I challenge anybody on here

    Post by Verse2 on Tue Sep 01, 2009 8:31 pm

    u jus aiiight/
    i've heard wayyy better analogies/
    merc em/
    den force a Chris Brown/
    "where's my apology"/
    Da Oddessy/
    trynna take da kingdom dat (I) built/
    trynna take da credit 4 da people dat i've kill~t/
    u not real son/
    at least not like me/
    and ya rhyme scheme is about as hot as Iced Tea/
    "think you dope im like flava flav rockin clocks"/

    think i'm "STILL" battle~n a mediocre nigga, right Scott?/(lol)
    Y stop?!/
    cuz JR ain't no writer/
    after i'm done wit em dey'll b hold~n up dey lighters/
    charge da nigga 2 cypher/
    2 breathe n my air/
    signal 4 my fighter jets/
    make em disappear/
    ****awww yeaaa****
    i think u need 2 listen up junior/
    shoulda did ya homework
    b4 u stepped n2 my room bruh/
    mediocre lines/
    dat makes u "MEDIOCRE GUY"
    u got "some" swagger/
    must perform on karoke night/(lol)
    hope he bright/
    and dat he learns from his short comings/
    he bout 2 get F'd/
    when i get his report from em/
    da highlight of ya verse was ya 1st 4 bars/
    now u slo~wly lose~n ya mind like Stephan Marb/
    (awww mannnn)
    average Joe~E~takes a L/
    might give em another 1/
    if things don't go well/
    if da punchline hits/
    den my right cross will/
    and after da follow thru watch how da black eye swells/
    u broke dog/
    we both kno u ain't gett~n pesos/
    prolly living n ya boyfriends shadow like Yayo/
    JR/
    say what up 2 Jerry Lawler 4 me/
    and don't quit ya day job/
    or expect a 2nd sob story/


    hahahaha...i'll give u some credit...u aiiight...
    maybe da 5th best i've heard on here...but outta da 5 i actually respect...
    u still like i said jus aiiight...u still need work...and dat flavor flav line proved it...lol...
    2 ever compare yaself 2 flavor flav is a loss in its own right...he's a hype man...he's a retard...and he's ugly...and even worse he makes all his money by look~n like an idiot...hahahaha...on 2nd thought keep compare~n urself 2 em...dats actually a good comparison...lol...ya write~N has promise...but i ain't lose~n 2 a half ass verse like dat...there's a reason y my name is Verse2.....and o yea.....u must b talk~n bout ya cell window...lol...cuz u ain't gett~n no win off me...but we need judge so i can put junior n his place

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    Re: I challenge anybody on here

    Post by JR on Tue Sep 01, 2009 10:29 pm

    honesty, n not on any hatin ish... there wasnt any real flow till the 2nd half where u just killed it. but the first 1/3 there wasnt any real good rhyme scheme goin on
    and come on now.. NOONE really actually admits they lost... so u sayin theres no way you goin lose is expected... and not comparin myself to his ideologies and his retarded ways.. jus his ice gear.

    i personally think im better.. but lets let some other pple decide?

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    Re: I challenge anybody on here

    Post by D Light on Tue Sep 01, 2009 11:18 pm

    yall think yall could win but im heatin up bubblein
    i stay throwin hard shots thats why ill beat u up rumblein
    listen my flow like 2 day old bubble gum i know its hard to chew
    the only good flow you got from da top is when ill make your head ooze
    i pack artilery that would erase u from history
    the only blade you got is kitchen knives that have your fingers blistering
    you tried to kill me why? that would only add to your misery
    u a crack fiend jittering make up wearing glittering unknown case like unsolved mysteries
    this gettin ugly quick i got a nasty reflex
    JR if you were eva a beast its cuz you were born wit defects
    do yall feel the volume im mastering
    and this nigga has his name verse2 cuz he comes after the massacering
    hes able to fix holes in his place but once i put holes in his face there is no plastering
    i bet this nigga so bitch his whore makes him sleep on the floor
    next day makes him do chores and wear an apron indoors
    and none want war in battle you have to be a soldier from the core
    then after that want more then after that guide ya otha niggaz like a tour
    build em up like a superstore yall now fucked and gon need saving like a superwhore
    thats what im here for to pressure dudes down
    cant back out now i just gave a full round
    reload ill explode on who wants a new sound
    click clack boom boom rrrah rrrah Owww


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    Re: I challenge anybody on here

    Post by D Light on Tue Sep 01, 2009 11:28 pm

    i started this and ima end it anyone disagrees post all you want but to me ima always
    come out firein

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    Re: I challenge anybody on here

    Post by Verse2 on Wed Sep 02, 2009 12:09 am

    as i said b4...i still think ur jus aiiight...and i respect da critisim and lil bit of love...no homo...but everything i write...i write 2 a beat...so there's always a flow 2 it...itz jus a matter of how da beats formatted...

    think you dope im like flava flav rockin clocks"/

    think i'm "STILL" battle~n a mediocre nigga, right Scott?/(lol)


    now dis line when i read it flowed alil flaw~ish when i read it back a few times...and da closer was alil rugged...but da rest flowed perfect n my eyes when i read it...

    JR/
    say what up 2 Jerry Lawler 4 me/
    and don't quit ya day job/
    or expect a 2nd sob story

    cuz i wanted 2 end it on a diff flow...but compared 2 ya joint....there was a mega diff...da majority of ya rap centered around gay shit...and dat shit is played out...and old...nuff~n original...nuff~n flipped...

    up until now u been rippin mediocre niggas
    but like my rhymes the fingers speedy over triggers

    ^flow was on point...and it was an aiight line...ain't gon front

    now you got a competitor whose better than ya go figure
    so stop with the hard talk and the walk the far walk

    ^dat faltered 4 me abit cuz u messed up there...
    it shoulda been...

    now you got a competitor whose better than ya go figure
    so stop with the hard talk and walk the far walk

    you on my level? pft i'll leave u in shock
    fuck a glock take a rock matter fact kick rocks

    ^and dat 1 showed u had swag...lol...no homo...but da fact dat u used rocks twice kinda took away from it


    but after dat it fell apart 4 me...dats being real on some honest 2 god shit...like i said compared 2 alot of da dudes whose shit i den read on here...urs was aiight...a bigger step n da right direction...and i respect dat...but even Flav's clocks i wouldn't b repp~n...lol

    as far as dubbz...i'll give a few lines dat even 4 fillers...kinda fucked ju over...4 me anyway...everybodies likes and dislikes are diff...naa mean...and maybe itz jus not my kinda material da stuff u talked about...idk

    "im the stallion of the game you a lil horsay"

    ^nooooooo...lol...dats jus not sumth~n a nigga would say...u started it off right...but da horsay finisher...eghh...it was like a punch from a kid wit down syndrome...jus haaa...shit nowhere near a nigga...lol

    "think you dope im like flava flav rockin clocks"

    ^and stepp~n away from da original reason about da falor flav comparison and y i ain't like it...really read da line...and think about what chu said...
    **think u dope ~ i'm like flava flav rock~n clocks** ...da line itself makes no sense...lol

    "i suggest u back down but its your call yay or nay"

    ^ dat line i got...but as a filler...it was kinda bad homie...lol...u kno what i mean...and none of dis is meant 4 clown~n...dis is being real...now~a~days...rap has escalated far as lyrics...and dats what we're here 2 grow on...i mean there's plenty of bubble gum rappers out there...naa mean...but da ones "REAL NIGGAS" listen 2...they usally have depth 2 em...double meaning bars...nice flows and all dat jazz...and i said ur better n da sense...dat dats da kinda lines i expect from u...most of da dudes here...

    i'ma shoot ya mom/
    and hit ya whore's mouth/
    rape ya grandma/
    den make ya daughter go south/

    dats about as original as i've seen 4 da most part...lol...not knock~n niggas...cuz u here 2 get better...Aly B was really good...and Spitzitreal27 was really good 2...there was a few...jus 2 names 2 run off u wanna see vocab...and lyrics...and not ya run of da mills...they're actually part of my 5...lol...

    but i see u n da light where i expect better lines...and a broader scope of material...da difference wit me and u...i use everything...ya name...things n ya rhymes...all dat...u don't have a pic up...or ya hometown or none of dat...so i can't go at dem...but u had my shit...and u didn't use none of it...so u lost points 4 dat...u saw i was black from my pic...race...1 thing 2 go off...i'm n jersey...u never came at dat...i'm 21...didn't go at dat...and instead u give a half ass verse like da 1 u gave...and say ohh...i feel i'm better den u...u actually made me lose alil respect n my eyes...


    and if u look at da picture...how i'm see~n it...and u think about whose winning...i'd say itz pretty one~sided right now...whatchu think...

    my bad 4 da length jus wanted 2 make sure u seen it wasn't on no hate~n stuff...jus keep~n it a hundred...

    stay up and b safe

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    Re: I challenge anybody on here

    Post by Verse2 on Wed Sep 02, 2009 12:58 am

    D Light wrote:click clack boom boom rrrah rrrah Owww

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    Re: I challenge anybody on here

    Post by Verse2 on Wed Sep 02, 2009 12:59 am

    hahahaha

    dude is funny...i hate 2 say it...but urs is worse den his...lol...and u da 1 who called me out...lol...

    and this nigga has his name verse2 cuz he comes after the massacering

    ^wow...da 1 line u make direct...and itz ass as all get out...lmao


    4 someone self proclaim~n dem selves da best on here....lmao....if JR read~n dis...den i ain't even gotta finish dat thought...wowww dog...i'm not even gonna do a full verse on dat 1...

    D light/
    can't even get his speech right/
    i see him at home practice~n his little Wii swipes/(lol)
    u killed ya~self/
    didn't even need 3 strikes/
    wayyyy past weak right?/
    end of his career like B~knight/
    W/
    O/
    W/
    who even fuckz witchu/
    ^dats da only time you'll ever walk away wit Wz/ (lol)
    hate 2 burst da bubble 2/
    but a win you'll never get/
    cuz after he wrote da verse/
    he had 2 re~edit it/ (lol)
    i'm effortless wit dis/
    prolly took u a while 2/
    prolly wrote it yesterday/
    like Yay dis'll wow dude/ (lol)
    naa homes i'm foul 2/
    da type dat Snipes Wesley/
    hit em wit a guitar/
    bury em wit Elvis Presly/
    he bitch like Lisa Lesie/
    dats why he did a post and dip/
    seen dat i was on/
    there's his post/
    now he's gone/ (lol)
    his spell~n is atrocious/
    has anybody noticed/
    ****firein****
    there's no "e"/
    its dropped 4 "i~n~g"/ (lol)
    u really need 2 bow 2 da (Ki)~n~g/
    ur my left testical/
    belong beside mister Mo~by D/
    yea/
    u kno itz me/
    mister long~ass~run~onnn/

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    Re: I challenge anybody on here

    Post by 703vaslim on Wed Sep 02, 2009 8:22 am

    i cant lie i cant lie sum of yall niggaz is wack
    try me and ill leave em bullets in tact
    stay on track and hop off ma ball sack
    holsters and nines nikka i stay strapped
    im grimy and grity but ma bars are soo ruthless
    fuk round nigga and ill leave yo ass toothless
    who diss?? nigga i am a nucsence truth be told niga i really do this
    im freash i shine like ma neckless
    reckless ill leave yo ass NECK less!!
    check diss 1 shot leave u breathless
    aint shyt so move on to da next bitch
    ima huztla i put crack in da street like potholes
    all diss SHITs da same xcept differnt ASSHOLLES

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    Re: I challenge anybody on here

    Post by D Light on Wed Sep 02, 2009 10:22 pm

    aight dike it dont matter if i dont spell my rymes appropriatly
    just when i battle i ate a pussy ferociously
    wit your missin letters all ova ya page my gameplay i made so pause from coaching me
    im glad u accepted to step in to get roasted b
    cuz i got an oven set for ya way past your degree
    if that freestyle of yours was no effort
    then your best is the worst
    my first verse was the reload
    now for verse2 feel the burst
    ya raps is off track
    you made them long ago to beats and tried to use me to bring em back
    in ya hood you a ghost cuz you write and type so much thats ya life so far
    my lines like snickers bro yo i make some sweet bars
    this the last you gon read from me im out to get cake
    thanks everybody watchout for the mixtape
    theres some crazy shit i posted i hope yall learn from and dont take (Verse2 ha!)
    i forced my title here myself call it sick rape
    cuz I fucked all you bitches up down sideways and straight
    703vaslim you fake i heard most those lines u replaced
    wit your own flow lil kit kat ho just *give it a break!*
    {1 yall}

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    Re: I challenge anybody on here

    Post by 703vaslim on Thu Sep 03, 2009 12:06 pm

    ur flows been broken
    bullets penetrate ur bones leave ur shirt soakin
    i see u hopin dat ur domes not in ma focus
    cuz 1 shot leave ur crew croakin
    and god dam dat kit kat lines old
    and i now u mad dat ur mixtape aint sold
    and i noe u mad dat ma flow is dam cold
    and now u runnin cuz of da guns dat i hold
    haha dis shyts easy to me
    VA slim frum da 703
    cum get sum if u a true Gee
    and Verse2 is better den u barnone
    he dont need a second verse he only need 1
    cuz u wack u said u eat pussy right???
    i guess u are wat u eat so i guess u a pussy Dike
    i aint even gotta drop a track but im still sicker den u
    no flu no disease i just do wat i do
    Direct call outs huh?? nigga i dont play
    do u like 50 call yo trick and make her day haha
    cuz D light is dim
    scared of me ha VAslim!!!

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    Re: I challenge anybody on here

    Post by Verse2 on Thu Sep 03, 2009 1:32 pm

    i can't b measured by nothing else then killigrams/
    make em disappear 4 da hot summer like killa~cam/
    "center cam"
    dis goes on ya wish list 4 santa/
    tell em drop off a book/
    dat can enhance ya grammar/
    and me vs 703/
    dats like 7 on 3/
    u got seven/
    better bet it on me/
    both y'all bars like "WHATEVA" 2 me/
    so when they don't make "cents"/
    don't expect any credit from me/
    whoaaaa/
    "U"
    think u better den "V"/
    pshhhhhhhhhhh/
    one more (a)gain/
    pshhhhhhhhhhh/
    what he say/
    pshhhhhhhhhh/


    they see me dey run n da room and panic/
    knowing damn well
    my bars flake n dey head jus like dandruff/
    b4 stepp~n 2 me/shoulda read my pamphlets/
    now dey gett~n son~ed out wit a binky and pampers/
    Gwen/
    ma dis shit is Bannanas/
    he a dike/like lohan/
    cuz he can't get any love from no man/
    if only u were real/i could feel ya/
    but u obsess~n over dat small glass of tila tequila/
    "get it" /
    get off my broom dis ain't quidditich/
    give em chron jus like riddick/
    all da time/
    he b lie~n/
    i'm off da top like a fit~it/
    i slide down da chimney n dis buissiness/
    so da girls love my "jolly" i'm sorta like saint nidd~icc/
    ya degree line/didn't allign wit all da rest of it/
    and wit all dem runs/
    i guess he really jus a congested prick/
    verse2 da medicine/
    lil homie's a fake/
    ain't gett~n money/
    but upgraded
    "now" deliver~n cake/(lol)
    and none of my shit off da shelf/
    so da punchline/dat punched guy/
    u could say is fresh 4 da L/
    and 703 ya last 2 bars were ya highlights/
    so ya (V)irgin~(A)ss got a (Slim) chance on prom night/ (prime~prom)
    usually i dumb my bars down/
    but i want there 2 b unanimous decision at da end of da round/
    u called dat butt rape/
    no wayyy fuck face/
    now itz my turn/
    get da camera and da duct tape/
    he say his lines is sooo sweet/kinda shady/
    well....
    i say...
    itz like candy from a baby



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    Re: I challenge anybody on here

    Post by Verse2 on Thu Sep 03, 2009 1:34 pm

    aiiight VA....if i hadda known u weren't come~n at me from jump...i woulda never put u n dat....lol....my bad...daps 4 da respect...dat verse was much better den da last 1....keep doin ya thing

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