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    D Light
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    good poem for this section

    Post by D Light on Wed Jul 15, 2009 10:37 am

    a poem I made for wifey a while back thought itd be cool to share

    Off the bat you could tell you and me are intact

    because if you were my candle then I'd be your match

    I really am glad that your with me

    we started off friends but we flew through it quickly

    because our shields were down instead of directly deflecting

    from the signals we gave we knew that trust was the first thing

    this bursting with smiles

    gives me thirst for a while

    and even when I mention her

    it makes a rise in my temperature

    I can't doubt what this love is about

    the precious times in my mind doesn't want to come out

    I can't forget you

    since I met you

    and laughs that we have makes me never regret to

    meet you again and again

    and never end

    the flame builds up every minute we spend

    nothing compares to it so I cannot pretend

    we started as a flicker now let the fire begin

    this is The Fire Within Thanks
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    MizAlyB
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    Re: good poem for this section

    Post by MizAlyB on Sun Aug 16, 2009 10:53 am

    I can see you are a real man by the truth in these views that you write;
    Can see you found the meaning of faith in your lovely wife... That's what's up!
    And not to be taken light cus she accepts your flaws and you hers despite.
    Miraculous like a bumblebee in flight,
    sometimes the smallest wings i.e. the little things are what carry dreams and
    make two questionable lives into one definitive right...
    Life should be bright; and sadness, by love made ever so slight...
    The poem was pretty fuckin tight...

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    Re: good poem for this section

    Post by d-snuts on Wed Aug 26, 2009 8:47 pm

    all this stuff is really well written i like this place

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