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    daniel872
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    start it, an ill finish it....whoever..

    Post by daniel872 on Sat May 16, 2009 4:52 am

    go ahead....u first..

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    Post by InFamous on Sat May 16, 2009 6:55 am

    Man i wont fuck with you... i think i know you
    This be my last rhyme tonight i go and grime
    Like biggie said I'm a piece of shit it aint hard to fucking tell when i die i wanna go to hell
    fuck i cant procede to tell from the top to the bottom i arise then fell and back up again
    does that ring a bell. daniel i express no hate this is fate guns now i need to tate
    I'm remmisnis but to many bodies missing bitches no not now i dont want to be kissing
    Homie you get to take my crown coz now upon me niggers will frown
    I'm leaving town ending it
    mother fuckers fronting like they miss me bitch no dont kiss me
    But please the mic you gotta cease coz me I'm up in a fucking breeze
    I put a magnum revolver to my head these cards im a fold ya
    dont need no car i wont even get far
    I'll end this in 16more bars to many crimes to many bad times
    to many people killed with my nine this planet aint for me cant you see
    Homie you need to spit on the mic about all the shit coz nah this aint a diss
    no time to sit back in bliss coz right now haters are strong and me weak as piss
    shit this sound like a diss not on you but me
    I'l lrap my car around a tree coz I'm a waste of space
    to many murders i comited with no trace on the front page
    Me i belong in a fucking cage or a grave all I am is a fucking nigger slave
    Me right now you need to tase torture me kill me the only thing i rember is bre
    from me you need to flee i beg of you kill me coz I'm a bad influence
    My muscels i can no longer tense once i flowed like ren
    The only thing i do is pray mac ten
    someone better murder me and leave me hanging off a fence
    Or i'll do it myself i dont get it why im in good health
    i creep around at night with stealth.
    I needa be killed like i said I'm a piece of shit
    i had to kill a bitch
    Daniel again this aint a diss it's just my last spit
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    Post by daniel872 on Sun May 17, 2009 9:51 pm

    umm...
    ok shit was ok..
    if it aint a diss, just your last spit
    then i aint even replyin, u gotta respect anybodys last spit
    dont matter if they dope or shit

    u think u know me???
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    Post by Randz on Mon May 18, 2009 3:10 pm

    Respect to infamous on his last rhyme,
    why give up? spit 1 more line.
    to 872 what cha gon do,
    when i come for you,
    bloody n muddy, in a puddle ya buddie,
    face down does it hurt clown?
    I diss I swing, I neva miss,
    I kiss with fists, kids get pist when i spits,
    I chase people trew the woods like Gordy,
    I tend to sometimes get gorry, horrorcore on the scean careful thinking im corny,
    ima savage beast, beastly beating Mc's neatly,
    ima stop for now, better be better then better cuz ima go pound 4 pound,
    there I start it u better finesh it or ill go retarded and rip out ya heart kid.

    honestly lol i know it shitty but u said start it so i did.
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    Post by daniel872 on Mon May 18, 2009 6:45 pm

    aight Randz so u new to freestyle???
    i know a thing or two, im just new to this forum....

    here it go..

    look dog u was retarted before u spat this shitty excuse of a rhyme,
    u must be out yo fuckin mind,
    wat happened? i told u i would only give u one time,
    u bored me to hell with yo first line,
    first things first, check ur verse,
    u illiterate n keep contradictin urself,
    i got incredible stealth, u betta watch ur health
    i tear ya ass up like a beast,
    n i aint chinese, or japanese
    but i hit u like Bruce Lee's,
    quick ass moves with ease,
    my shits hot hittin a 1000 degrees,
    ur shits dope?? bitch please
    shut da fuck up resume the position n get back on ur knees,
    i got that rap expertise,
    rockin brown khakis n whites tees,
    i aint even tryin, n u already on da floor dyin
    ur bitch ass lying, keep talkin shit, out da window you'll be flyin
    u started i finished, ur ass has just been diminished
    like the trade center demolished, like a fire extinguished
    im a make like a tom n cruise,
    leavin ur ass with a bruise
    i know ur ass confuse,
    u shouldnt have lit my fuse,
    ur rhymes was cheese,
    im out n peace...


    look homie, ''corny'' and ''neatly'', do not rhyme...
    an when u said, ''when i come for you,
    bloody n muddy, in a puddle ya buddie,''.....complete contradiction....
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    Post by Randz on Tue May 19, 2009 5:35 pm

    not bad and yeh im still new but i aint giving up easy and neatly was to rhyme with beastly corny was with gorry and when i said "when i come for you" that was following "872 what cha gon do" and bloody n muddy in a puddle ya buddie was what "would happen when i come for you :p" lol
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    Post by daniel872 on Wed May 20, 2009 3:00 am

    aight aight homie..
    i gotcha my bad..
    i still murdered ur ass...


    ur whole rhyme was kinda wack, step up ur vocabulary...
    it'll make it easier to flow..
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    Post by daniel872 on Wed May 27, 2009 2:45 am

    what no one wanna start nothing..???

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    Post by WhiteKnight89 on Thu May 28, 2009 1:35 am

    White, so niggas think i aint worth tryin
    Try me, and niggas end up diein'
    AInt liek one of those valentine preasents
    Push my buttons and niggas gunna get it
    And the cops, i dont sweat em'
    5-0 thats 50
    amount of cops left with lead in em"
    the bread comes so easy,
    2 too the chest leaves wayne a lil weezy
    How bout some anisteezy
    So it dont hurt so bad when i leave you in my breezy
    Like T.I. broads greet me on their Kneezies
    Mouths wide open just beggin ME to skizzeet
    But i aint tryin talk that fo sheezy
    fuck snoop dog
    that niggas lines are cheezy
    And my rhymes are the bomb
    hirroshima cant compare when im puttin it on.
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    Post by daniel872 on Thu May 28, 2009 2:42 am

    yo ur rhymes is wack,
    even my girl agrees u cant rap,
    ur shit stinkin like a fuckin piece crap,
    an stop sayin nigga, u fake ass wigga,
    us a boy im a man, im bigger,
    if i have to keep hearin ur wack shit im a have to pull the trigger,
    ill throw u down a hole, the gravedigger,
    snoop is wack?? bitch wat u smokin pot or crack??,
    u cant get down wit ''Nothin but a G thang baby'',
    in 20, 30 years later, maybe,
    oh i forgot us a faggot, u dont like a lady,
    i knew u looked a lil shady,
    ur names billy, but in da streets is katie,
    look snow white, just drop the mike,
    u gotta lot a bark, but no bite,
    ill shatter ur skull leavin u with fright,
    im a high ranking warrior n u a low lvl knight,
    im never late right on site, murder this shit n be outta sight,
    u bringin a shotgun n a shell,
    im bringiin a whole fuckin arsenal,
    an when im done ia hole u dwell,
    bitch its called hell,
    an read ur shit learn how to spell,
    like i said before ur shits crap an its startin to smell...

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    Post by WhiteKnight89 on Thu May 28, 2009 2:58 am

    My dudes goin real hard,
    but i take no offense when its comming from a retard
    and i may be a low level knight,
    but ask your girl i can lay the pipe
    you dont know shit about me
    spread your girls legs like moses did the red sea
    i aint jewish though, let me spell this out for you nice and slow
    W A C K
    thats wat i think of your rhyms,
    ive spit better shit straight from my behind
    you just finished last
    get off the mic cause your time has long passed

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    Post by WhiteKnight89 on Thu May 28, 2009 3:21 am

    oh and who you callin billy
    we share the same name so lets not be silly
    pull the trigger? dude why you wanna kill me?
    is it cause you cant see my rhymes?, welll little guy it takes lots of time
    so get a pencil and paper,
    write some good shit and come back to me later
    done wastin my time on scrubs like you
    19 and married? that screams "im a fool"
    so peace dude im outie
    wigger and proud
    but my nigga dont doubt me
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    Post by daniel872 on Thu May 28, 2009 4:00 am

    bitch, i aint white...


    i spit n splatter ur brain matter,
    all over the fuckin floor,
    n beat ur fuckin head wit the door,
    im bad to the muthafuckin core,
    n u dont lay the pipe u prick,
    ur dudes they give u the dick,
    yea they do go hard, hard all up in ur yard,
    u aint get the mail, this is my tale,
    u moses, but they aint no god no aarons rod,
    n im the pharoah, shoot ur head with a fuckin arrow,
    im the first latin rapper to rattle ur skull, an master the flow,
    i throw up the west sign, u cant take mine,
    try n ill pull out my tech nine,
    stop wasting time, u cant fuckin rhyme,
    yea iam 19 have a girl n ready to get serious,
    u 15 , maturbates n is fuckin delirious ,
    u never touched a pussy in ur life,
    not even ur dads ugly ass wife,
    n u kno i aint lying ,
    i aint even fuckin trying,
    so stop fuckin crying.....

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    Post by WhiteKnight89 on Thu May 28, 2009 10:07 am

    you called me a wigger guy,..i was sayin proud of it..

    and enough with the violence
    i know its all talk and its makin me tired
    pass out in my chair
    the shit your sayin is a nightmare
    just open my eyes and i see its all fake
    steppin to me was your first big mistake
    and chill with the tech nine
    while your buckin lead my lyrics leave you way behind
    and im so much ahead of you
    already saw her say no, now shes givin me head too
    seein red arnt you?
    pissed cause you missed your diss and im shreadin you
    never met so lets start back at the top,
    waddup im danny and everything i spit is hot.
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    Post by daniel872 on Sat May 30, 2009 10:13 pm

    watup bitch u thought i was done,
    nah i just came back to finish u son,
    i neva run, i got one to many pun,
    u got wat...??, none,
    u the mayan ppl n im da sun,
    u give praise to me the only one,
    i aint even tryin i do dis shit for fun,
    im crazy as hell like atila the hunn,
    im like a taser gun, leavin u stun,
    leaving ur head spun,
    u lost this shit since it begun,
    yea iam seein red, i see the blood in ur head,
    after i leave that shit filled wit lead,
    u gonna need first med,
    u was always a bitch u neva had street cred,
    since u started ur shit was wack,
    just put ur glovez up hang them on da rack,
    lyrical skillz is watchu lack,
    get to fuck back, u shit aint worth jack,
    shitty ass rhymes make me wanna take a nap,
    cuz all u talk is fuckin crap,
    ill punch ur mouth n leave u with a big ass gap,
    walk into my hood, it be like 1,2,3 Snap!!
    u just walked into a fuckin trap,
    is yo ass im a bitch slap,
    now get the fuck back where u came from, u aint ready to scrap,
    ain u heard??? bitch white boyz cant rap..
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    Post by Randz on Sun May 31, 2009 3:50 pm

    I pop pop den chill,
    smoke my blunt while ya blood spill,
    no i aint ill, but i still kill.
    i murder a rhyme one word at a time,
    i got a murderus mind, uniqe, im my own kind,
    This kid is a Mad man call me Randz,
    God Damn im gifted to walk mother natures lands,
    I inhail smoke more then my poetry is wrote,
    When spoke spitten or written its no joke,
    kid i aint shittin or quittin ima be giving a lickin,
    Wish i had more rhymes in the vault,
    wait hault....
    i got work soon so jerk go back to ya tree like a baboon,
    get lifted to the air like a hileum filled balloon,
    get harpooned while i eat out your brain with a spoon,
    trying gain ur vocabulary, think this shits scary?
    I'll crack ya head wid a bottle of sherry,
    your punch lines are weak like that of jerry,
    Im that ace of spades,
    I rap without rage,
    this is it, has my rhyme fades,
    ima mystical mage like sage,
    a demon unleashed from the cage,
    when i get back from work the next rhyme typed gonna hurt.


    Weak start, nice finesh but i gtg work so what eva

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