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Freestyle Rap

Rap Battles and Freestyle Raps

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    My style...

    Matt The Ripper
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    Post by Matt The Ripper Mon Mar 24, 2008 8:24 pm

    They say my style's bland, while sand keeps fallin', 'n spiders keep crawlin'!
    My style expands minds, demands minds pay attention!
    There's a lesson to be learned from any intervention!
    You can't concentrate wit' all tha constant hate!
    Getting your attention is my main intention!
    I'm opening your mind to new dimensions!
    Just open your eyes, to find comprehension!
    Elevatin' your game's a constant competition!
    My mind's more complicated than long division!
    My rhyme's are used as ammunition!
    You can't say that I don't have ambition!
    For dinner, we're havin' lamb, fish, 'n chips!
    You can't play Matt, I don't have a mission!
    Just kiddin', I do, i'm admittin'
    my mission is to beat you into submission,
    'til ya wishin' I didn't come wit' my best composition!
    Bitches keep bitchin', i'm itichin' to rip 'em!
    E-Klypse
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    Location : British Columbia, Canada

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    Post by E-Klypse Mon Mar 24, 2008 9:48 pm

    kind of basic, though i see potential to elevate...stay active n keep battling you'll learn about wordplay n shit

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    Chrispy
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    Post by Chrispy Fri Mar 28, 2008 11:02 am

    Theres no mistaking that you have potential to elevate.. I suggest you try to get a decent understanding about the elements of rhyme (ie; wordplays, multis, flow..), just keep practicing and you'll elevate rapidly.
    Matt The Ripper
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    Post by Matt The Ripper Fri Mar 28, 2008 3:21 pm

    I understand multis... my flow's fine... wordplay is what I need the most work on... and incorporating more metaphor's!

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