this is my struggles every day live in the hustle/
tryin to look up to the rich and the dealers above you/
but those dealers would snub you,throw slugs cause you trouble/
all in a days work tryin to make ya cash double/
but you get it quick as you lose it that why i try to do music/
ruthless but have to use it cause so many cats abuse it/
im way sicka/strictly cause i look at the big picture/
this is my life my story yall are readin my scriptures/
sippin on mixtures/askin just for jesus protection/
cause when they attack the gats blast leave you with no midsection/
no question, im filthy just tryin to make you feel me/
the real,b/im a gun they tried to conceal me/
but im still me lurkin the streets burnin them trees/
waitin for peace but trust me murder will never cease/
so all we can do is hope and/ dream with our eyes wide open/
cause some dudes are straight locin others just gon be dope fiends.//

Dope freestyle my dude.. Hey my buddy is giving away his beats for free. If you wanna write those rhymes to his beats hit him up on his loud.com profile

http://www.loud.com/jalyan_powers

stop tryin so hard ta make words fit ur not that bad soon enough ull learn from ya mistakes n start progressin if u keep at it if ur still a youngin pay attention in english class if ur out of school u just need too boost the vocabulary and use ur imagination more remember rap is art find a style n make it ur own